What a great poem! Also, because I'm terrible at metaphor/simile, I like the idea of actively naming things around me as an intentional way to get better at it. (I remember being a senior in high school when our English teacher made us read "Metaphors" by Sylvia Plath and none of us got it.)
Keeping everyone guessing is just another reason to love you and your free spirit.
This link of astral projecting to writing is top notch.
And that poem is beautiful.
And this is my favorite substack you’ve written so far.
I’m so curious now…
What a great poem! Also, because I'm terrible at metaphor/simile, I like the idea of actively naming things around me as an intentional way to get better at it. (I remember being a senior in high school when our English teacher made us read "Metaphors" by Sylvia Plath and none of us got it.)